jueves, 30 de abril de 2009

My best Friend


This photograph is very important to me, I like it so much, and I’m going to tell you why.

It was taken by a friend in a scout camp, his name is Eduardo, he always takes photos, and all the important moment in scout has photos like this one. We were in a scout activity named “torneo”, something like playing all the morning in teams. This was a camp named “San Pablo”, the most important camp in this year.

This photograph shows two girls that are very important to me. They are my best friends Camila and Paz. I know them since I was a little girl in kinder garden. Actually I don`t remember when I met Camila, we has photos with only a few month, when we was babies. The girl on the left is Camila, and the girl on the right is Paz. We were sixteen years old when this picture was taken.

I like it because in this photo I can see tow important things in my life. My best friends and a Scout camp. I’m a scout since five years old, so it is very important to me. There I met my friends, and I learned a lot of things.

I love these girls so much. We are one, we know everything about each other, we spend important moment together, and we keep in touch despite the distance.

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  1. Dear Student
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    This photograph is very important to me, I like it so much, and I’m going to tell you why.

    It was taken by a friend in a scout camp, his name is Eduardo, he always takes photos, and all the important momentS in scout hAVE photos like this one. We were in a scout activity named “torneo”, something like playing all the morning in teams. This was a camp named “San Pablo”, the most important camp in this year.

    This photograph shows two girls that are very important to me. They are my best friends Camila and Paz. I know them since I was a little girl in kinder garden. Actually I don`t remember when I met Camila, we WERE IN THE photos with only a few monthS, when we wERE babies. The girl on the left is Camila, and the girl on the right is Paz. We were sixteen years old when this picture was taken.

    I like it because in this photo I can see THE important things in my life. My best friends and a Scout camp. I’m a scout since five years old, so it is very important to me. There I met my friends, and I learned a lot of things.

    I love these girls so much. We are one, we know everything about each other, we spend important momentS together, and we keep in touch despite the distance.

    grade: 6.5

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